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 Post subject: YMtCotW: Spare The Dying
PostPosted: Mon May 22, 2023 5:03 pm 
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Spare the Dying

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Target creature gains indestructible until end of turn.
Benevolence - If you don't control that creature, you gain 4 life and draw a card.


it's CKY! make a card that uses the Benevolence ability word. as I read it, this is an ability word that denotes an additional effect when a spell that's beneficial to its target is used on a target you don't control. I have some issues with this particular execution, so I'll allow you to make minor changes to the mechanic if you so choose.

you have until this time Friday. go!

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PostPosted: Mon May 22, 2023 5:23 pm 
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Benevolence — Target player discards a card. If they do, they exile the top two cards on their library and may play those cards as long as they remain exiled. If that player isn't you, you create a copy of each of those cards and you may play those copies until the end of your next turn.
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PostPosted: Mon May 22, 2023 5:24 pm 
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Target player gains 20 life.
Benevolence—If that player is an opponent, put ten +1/+1 counters on each creature you control. They gain indestructible, trample, and haste until end of turn.
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PostPosted: Mon May 22, 2023 5:43 pm 
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Target player draws two cards and loses 2 life.
Under Contract - If you aren't the target of this spell, create a 4/4 black Ogre Rogue creature token.
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It would use the benevolence wording when targeting a creature: "If you don't control that creature, ..."


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PostPosted: Mon May 22, 2023 6:51 pm 
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Exile target creature card from a graveyard. Create a token that is a copy of that creature.
Benevolence - If you don't own that creature, it's owner may cast it for as long as it remains exiled.

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PostPosted: Mon May 22, 2023 9:44 pm 
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Target attacking or blocking creature gets +3/+3 until end of turn.
Gambit - If you don't control that creature, creatures you control gain hexproof and indestructible until end of turn.
"Attack us with all your might: you will see the elves of thos land don't crumble so easily."

Rewording it to Gambit since benevolence seems like a weird keyword for a competive game

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PostPosted: Mon May 22, 2023 10:59 pm 
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Phyresis Plague

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Target creature gains Infect until end of turn
Benevolence - If you don't control that creature, you may copy Phyresis Plague and you may choose new targets for the copy

Because nothing says friendly like "Your big wurm will hit me for poison counters instead of lethal real damage and my chump blocker on the other one will deal -1/-1 counters"

EDIT: added an additional "may" to prevent a forced draw when every legal target is one you don't control

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PostPosted: Tue May 23, 2023 9:56 am 
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Kingmaker
Creature - Human Advisor
Benevolence - When Kingmaker enters the battlefield, another target creature takes the crown. If you don't control that creature, put an indestructible counter on Kingmaker.
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The crowned creature is a Noble. It has vigilance if it's white, ward 2 if its blue, menace if its black, battle cry if its red, and mentor if its green.
Creatures you control that share a creature type with the crowned creature get +1/+1.

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PostPosted: Tue May 23, 2023 12:42 pm 
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Phyresis Plague

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Target creature gains Infect until end of turn
Benevolence - If you don't control that creature, copy Phyresis Plague and you may choose new targets for the copy

Because nothing says friendly like "Your big wurm will hit me for poison counters instead of lethal real damage and my chump blocker on the other one will deal -1/-1 counters"


What happens when you target an opponent's creature with the copy? Doesn't it keep looping?

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PostPosted: Tue May 23, 2023 3:48 pm 
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Phyresis Plague

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Target creature gains Infect until end of turn
Benevolence - If you don't control that creature, copy Phyresis Plague and you may choose new targets for the copy

Because nothing says friendly like "Your big wurm will hit me for poison counters instead of lethal real damage and my chump blocker on the other one will deal -1/-1 counters"


What happens when you target an opponent's creature with the copy? Doesn't it keep looping?

Yup, you can do the Chain of Smog combos in a way slightly more difficult than Chain of Smog. I don't consider that to be a huge deal.

Or you can infectize any number of opposing creatures and one that's not *shrug*. seems fit.

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PostPosted: Tue May 23, 2023 11:02 pm 
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Diplomat's Immunity -
Enchantment - Aura
Enchant Creature
Flash
Enchanted creature has hexproof.
Benevolence - If you don't control enchanted creature, its controller plays with their hand revealed.
"Sure, the court can grant you certain privileges, but in return, you would have to do us a favor... ..."

Was debating between letting you look at anytime, but in a multi player game, that might feel like it disrupts the flow too often so still opted for reveal.


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PostPosted: Tue May 23, 2023 11:04 pm 
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Diplomatic Immunity -
Enchantment - Aura
Enchant Creature
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Enchanted creature has hexproof.
Benevolence - If you don't control enchanted creature, its controller plays with their hand revealed.

Was debating between letting you look at anytime, but in a multi player game, that might feel like it disrupts the flow too often so still opted for reveal.

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PostPosted: Tue May 23, 2023 11:05 pm 
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Confused wrote:
Diplomatic Immunity -
Enchantment - Aura
Enchant Creature
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Enchanted creature has hexproof.
Benevolence - If you don't control enchanted creature, its controller plays with their hand revealed.

Was debating between letting you look at anytime, but in a multi player game, that might feel like it disrupts the flow too often so still opted for reveal.

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PostPosted: Wed May 24, 2023 3:06 am 
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Shelter the Weak
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Put a shield counter on target creature.
Benevolence — If you don't control that creature, you gain 4 life and draw a card.

Savor Flesh
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Target creature gets -3/-3 until end of turn.
Masochism — If you control that creature, draw two cards.

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Bribe — If that player is an opponent, they reveal their hand. You may play a card revealed this way without paying its mana cost.
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I don't like how restrictive the flavor of the ability word is, so I changed it. It doesn't really make thematic sense to take advantage of someone you showed benevolence to.

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Psychotechnics
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Target creature gains haste and flying until end of turn. Untap it.
Benevolence - If you don't control that creature, gain control of it until end of turn. ~ costs more to play.
"No no, don't worry. This probing is for your own good. This time." - Tzek, Izzet Psychomancer

Yeah, I know this basically gives haste and temp. control. to monoblue and flying to monored, but I think there's a viable overlap here.


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Traveler's Blessing
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Search your library for a basic land card, put it onto the battlefield tapped under any player's control, then shuffle.
Benevolence - If that land entered the battlefield under an opponent's control, untap all basic lands you control.
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I don't have any good ideas for this one

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