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Will this count in the grand scheme of things?
Yes! The tale will echo in the mouths of the people and become an unstoppable tide! (Yea) 50%  50%  [ 1 ]
More hope in filling a well with thoughts and hopes (Nay) 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
It will fade into memory, but only to emerge again (NAI) 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
It's difficult to say, destiny is a winding road (Abstain) 50%  50%  [ 1 ]
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 Post subject: [Vote] Just a Statistic
PostPosted: Sun Feb 17, 2019 4:24 pm 
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Location: Homestuck rehab center
Identity: Inertially male
Preferred Pronoun Set: he/him
Characters: Elphimas, Kalit Mudroha
Locations: Fisecaric
Required readings: A Mouthful of Venom
Recommended readings: Awake in the Dark
Warnings: graphic violence, implied mass murder, mental breakdown POV.

(the parts when Elphimas describes the ritual circle and figures out Risara's part have been edited)

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 12, 2019 11:10 pm 
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I'm going to vote Yea on this. I have noted my various small issues with this story, but as I said in the other thread, they are in fact fairly minor, or simply a matter of opinion. There are a lot of really nice moments with Elphimas here, particularly just before they pick the lock, and Kalit's reaction to being called a monster is a good moment for him.

So Yea from me.


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